Long work day, lovely dinner with friends, now home rather late. Eyes not really staying open. I did sketch out some plot threads at work, and tomorrow I have time blocked to finish this scene and hopefully move on to the next one.

A concern I have with the current scene is that it reveals too much too fast about the bad guys. What do folks think? It’s necessary for some plot down the line for Hark and Petal to know about these variant types, but should it happen in the first encounter? Still pondering that one. . . .

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